Saturday, March 11, 2017

The Stack - 3.11 #sol17 Story Challenge

When I used to carry a stack,
I hefted it in a crate.
It was a visible burden.
of not insubstantial weight.

This weekend, the stack is back;
now it floats off in the cloud.
Digitally ephemeral,
it still can't be disavowed.

8 comments:

  1. Nice! I am in awe of your vocabulary. :-) ~JudyK

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  2. I am with Judy, impressive word choice :)

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  3. I am interested in more about the "stack" - I hope it isn't too stressful of a burden! Loved the use of rhyme and the poem

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    1. Reviewing and responding to students' writing. Just stressful enough ;)

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  4. Floating in the cloud
    Or toted in a crate
    Visible or not
    It's still substantial weight!

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  5. Is the stack lighter now that it is virtual?

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  6. Congrats on your eight lines, and the joy of technology. When it works ... loved the poem.

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