Tuesday, March 20, 2018

Spring Harbingers - 3.20 #sol18 Story Challenge



14 comments:

  1. A shape poem to honor the arrival of spring - wonderful (guess we missed the notice here on Long Island so I am back to preparing the winter gallery for flight). Please package this poem with the title Spring Harbinger, your name and location, Brian for my spring gallery early entry. Thanks.

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    1. Will do, Carol. I thought of you and your seasonal galleries as I was writing today. Glad you saw the result!

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  2. Beautiful words, the visual you created adds the perfect touch!

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  3. Beautiful poem and picture. I am longing for spring here in PA.

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  4. Very cool, Brian! The font choice adds to the flight.

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  5. Very nice! The shape is perfect. ~JudyK

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  6. "Spring has sprung. The grass is riz. I wonder where the boidies is. They say the boidie's on the wing. But that's absoid. The wings is on the bird."
    Your slice made today better! !dnuora lla sguH

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  7. Oooooo. I love this and must show it to my Kindergarten poets. Our poem of the week is a stanza from Amy Ludwig VanDerwater's "Every Day Birds" and it mentions "Goose flies in a V." They'll love this for not only the content, but because I've been meaning to share concrete poetry with them. Thanks for this!

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  8. What a wonderful and eye-catching poem! Thank you for sharing this. We recently finished up our poetry unit, and I have some first and second graders who will totally appreciate this piece. :)

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  9. Perfect shape, perfect words, perfect font. Flapping east together toward a hopeful sun. The sun can be so hopeful.

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  10. Fabulous concrete poem. It captures the beauty and elegance of the season, and offers hope that Spring is on its way.

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  11. Brain,

    So powerful, simple and engaging. Thank you for making my heart go yes, Spring will be here soon.

    Best wishes.

    Purviben

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